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Kristi Joy Rimbach's avatar

I love every line of this poem💜

Dipti  Vyas's avatar

This is quietly beautiful. I love how you let the grass mirror human vulnerability without forcing the comparison—the weariness, the waiting, the need for warmth all feel so natural. That line “No, winter is no time for the thin” really lingers; it’s tender and honest, not bleak. And ending with “sturdy sinews of memory” gives the poem such a grounded, resilient warmth. It feels like a gentle hand held through the cold.

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